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aeonflux
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This is my first King Arthur fic. It's a Lancelot/Guinvere, Arthur/Guinvere fic, rated NC-17 for future chapters. Feedback is much appreciated!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3242589/1/

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Me likey.  Very well written, you can feel their anguish and it's making me want to see this movie, is it out yet for rental?

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Thanks Angel :) Yes it is out for rental. Make sure you get the Director's Cut because that's where all the good Lancelot/Guinevere scenes are. However there is not much romance in the movie - it's very subtle, this fic is more my interpretation of them :)

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Chapter 2 is up!  - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3242589/2/

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This is really good! I want to read more... & to find out whether you intend to follow the canon entirely, or to re interpret/ go off in a different direction.

I haven't seen the latest Arthurian film, but I loved Excalibur..

 

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Thanks Jerume! Very glad you enjoyed it! It's kind of a mix between the actual legends and the movie King Arthur and of course my own interpretation :)
Hope to have chapter 3 up in about a week if all goes well :)

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I am really enjoying this story of tormented love between them.  Keep it coming!

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Let the wenching begin!:haha:

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Thanks Angel and Veyron! I really appreciated you guys reading this and I'm glad you are enjoying it so far :)

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Finally Chapter 3 is up and posted!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3242589/3/

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Will fate ever let them be together or will duty split them apart?  Another great chapter!

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Thank you! You will just have to wait and see what fate has in store for them! More excitement on the way :)

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The plot thickens, the intrigue intensifies, will Lance ever get dressed?:speechless2:

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Lol! Not as long as I'm writing this puppy! He's gonna be naked throughout :c030a: Hey Gwen got naked too so stop your moaning eh! Sorry I wasn't as descriptive about her bath! :D

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Chapter 4 is up!!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3242589/4/

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Woo Hoo!!!!:yourock:

Last edited on Wed Dec 13th, 2006 01:56 am by veyron

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I never guessed Merlin would be the one coming upon him in the cave.  Oh man, never piss off Guinevere if you want to live!

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I was actually quite shocked that 1 person on one of my other forums actually guessed right that is was Merlin!

Oh yeah, don't piss off miss Gwen! Poor Lancey is not gonna know what hit him :)

I really want to portray Gwen as the tough warrior that she is. I don't like when people make her this weak little thing, cause she is not weak. Only problem is when you show her as tough people start calling her a bitch (which of course she is NOT!)!




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shhhhh..ixsnay erlinsmay. :fear2: LOL

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who's erlisnmay :c030a:

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Chapter 5 is up!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3242589/5/

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Lancelot has become a hero to the town and the boys, but will he still be one in Guinevere's eyes?  Never piss off a woman.... :s010a:

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Very Nice! And the swords do sing with holiday spirit!:xmas22:

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Thanks y'all. And Lancey is MY hero always :c030a:

Amen to that veyron. I knew my beta would come up with something good!

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oh Aeon excellent story! Truly lovely and you're such a wonderful writer! I love it..

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Thanks Ketana!

Chapter 6 is up!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3242589/6/

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His heart begged his hand to knock on the door; but he knew he could not.

 

oh my heavens..but this line..just melted my heart! Oh Aeon..I love it so..truly!

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Aww thanks Ketana! So glad you are enjoying it :) I'm having a blast writing this.

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Nice read, loved it!  Wonderful descriptions, imagery!

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I really like how you write their torment.  In a way though Guin was with Arthur, which is what made Lancelot spend the night with another woman, so she can't really blame him, she wasn't being faithful to him and she IS marrying Arthur.  Their's is a timeless story.  What's going to happen next when he enters that cave?  Hurry and write! hehehe..

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Thanks for the awesome feedback guys! I really appreciate it :)

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Chapter 7 is finally done! Big sigh :)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3242589/7/

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OH Yeah, i am so there!  Printing it out to take with me this morning.  I cant wait to read this awesome effort on your part!! :yourock:

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:3_3_6: Now thats some right hot climactic writing!  Very endearing as well.  Beautiful work, worth the wait!

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Thanks veyron :) Glad you enjoyed it and it was worth the wait!

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aeonflux wrote: Chapter 7 is finally done! Big sigh :)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3242589/7/

*sighs*  So beautifully written, such a tormented love between both of them.  Too bad they didn't run away with each other, but duty and honor forbad it.

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Thank you Angel!

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And Guinevere finally responded, by instantly silencing him and fiercely crushing her lips against his.

 

DAMN! DAMN! DAMN YOU TO HELL WOMAN! I so love the drama! but Aeon..this, this was..so...FUCKING FANTASTIC GIRL! WOW! 

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Thanks Ketana! So glad you liked it! :)



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